Friday Writing Task week 12
Bronze Medal: 3 paragraphs I got Bronze
Silver Medal: 4 paragraphs
Gold Medal: 5 paragraphs
One day my family and I went to the beach to go for a swim because it was a sunny day and it was hot outside, so we packed all our stuff back up and started going to the beach. When we got there we saw that there were a lot of people there and pets as well but the one thing my mum didn’t want was that if we were ever to get lost she wouldn't want her to go looking for us just because we went missing but we did. So that day my mum went looking for all three of us even though she didn’t want to but looking for us meant that she loved us that’s why she went looking for us.
That day when she went looking for us we started swimming around to find sea creatures but the only creature we saw was the blue whale for some reason….
TO BE CONTINUED….
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